I'm posting a piece from the very beginning of my book to see what you guys think. It's kind of like a poem I guess, but I'm not quite sure. Anyways, here it is.
Lost
They say that love is the best feeling in the whole world.
I still haven’t agreed with that yet.
I’m either crazy, or they’re wrong.
For the love I’m feeling is killing me.
I can’t sleep.
I can’t eat.
I feel agonizing pain when I’m away.
It’s driving me insane.
Her image constantly haunts me.
If this is love, then love is pain!
And still I want more.
I can’t imagine anything different.
I don’t want this feeling to stop.
If this is the price to pay for loving her, then I’d pay it a million times!
She’s beautiful. I can’t leave her. I’ve silently sworn to protect her.
Her pain is mine. Her joy is mine.
She has been forever fused to my heart.
I can’t leave her.
You’d think I’m crazy. Obsessed with a girl I just met.
You don’t have to fight for your air.
You don’t feel the pain of being away every day.
This is my fight. I don’t expect you to understand.
The moment I saw her, my heart was trapped, and it can’t let go.
She’s my pain.
She’s my joy.
She’s my Ecstasy.
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OMG switch the "he's" to "she's" and so on and it's exactly my life! It freaked me out when I first read this becuase this describes my life so perfectly it's scary. . . and OH I think it's AMAZINGLY written and I really want to read the rest! Also, it's so weird because it totally goes with my song that I wrote this summer that was inspired by real events and such that I just barely posted on my blog! Geez! It's crazy!
it really good! i like the descriptions and junk like that!
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